急,斷然提筆很可能出現審題失誤等情況。應該先仔細地看兩遍題目,劃出關鍵詞,確定主題,構思好一個合理的框架。
以15年12月的六級真題為例 ☟溫州家教,溫州家教網,溫州育才家教,溫州家教中心www.wzycjj.com
Direction:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the harm caused by misleading information online. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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關鍵詞
unfortunate, misleading information
主題
negative impact of misleading information
結構
開頭段
Briefly describe the picture. (A man is sitting in front of a computer, searching information. A woman is holding a cup of coffee. There is a caption of words under the picture which reads…)
Reveal the problem. (Excessive information brings inconvenience)
(Present your idea.)
主體段
Analyze the problem. (Cause/background: In the age of information explosion, internet is overloaded with complex information… )
P.S. 可用讓步狀語從句適當帶過一下信息時代的好處。
Negative impact of misleading information. (People who blindly believe in misleading information are more likely to suffer from great loss such as privacy disclosure…)可用例證/對比/分析/數據適當展開。
The second adverse effect of misleading information. (People could fall victim to internet fraud…) 同樣可適當展開。
結尾段
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Conclusion. (Considering the facts outlined above, it is reasonable to conclude that misleading information poses severe threats to people’s privacy and make them susceptible to cyber fraud…)
如果主體段豐滿且字數足夠可選加 ☟
Suggestions/conditions: only when we adopt critical attitude towards information online and distinguish useful information from the misleading one can we truly benefit from it.
真正考試的時候可能沒有這么多時間去搭建一個這么細致的框架,可以先簡要列出每個部分的大致內容,寫的時候再慢慢填進去。
有很多作文題目傾向于正面的,積極的,有啟發性的主題,這時候大家也盡量從正面思考,闡述題目的積極意義。
以14年12月的四級真題為例 ☟
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可以發現題目側重兩個方面:campus activity和 benefit.
首先介紹這個campus activity是什么(例如:speech contest),當然前面可以稍加鋪墊。
這個campus activity如何讓我受益。(可以列舉2~3點,并列或者遞進式的闡述:accumulate knowledge, overcome stage fright, improve my eloquence, make new friends…)
可以用最概括性的原因來總結。(Speech contest is a highlight in my university life as it helps me to grow mature, both intellectually and mentally…)
當然如果遇到負面的題目,大家則可以從多個維度分析這個現象出現的原因,產生的影響以及解決措施等(可參考第一篇)。如果想盡可能的展現批判性思維也可以從正反方面探討你對一個現象的看法。
以15年6月的另一篇四級作文題目為例 ☟
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
這篇文章就可以從excessive reliance on computer和computer as a rewarding tool兩方面進行辯證討論。
需要注意的是,主題有可能不是社會現象,而側重人的心理,觀念,好的品質等。這時候要注意提煉出其中具有教育意義的信息,從這些信息展開
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